Archive for April, 2008

genus: narcissus

I have decided to give my thoughts about a poem I heard from Natasha Tretheway. I have decided to analyze “Genus Narcissus”. Of course, this was a poetry reading so the first time I heard this poem I was a little confused when I thought the title was “Gina’s Narcissus”. But through some research on the web I was able to find the poem and reread it with the correct title. 

Natasha’s poems are very descriptive and tend to have a lot of metaphors and personification. “Genus Narcissus” is about when Natasha would walk home from school and pick daffodils for her mother because she could see herself in them. But daffodils live a short spring and Natasha made that connection with her mother’s early death. I did some research on the word daffodils: its scientific genus is called Narcissus. I found it very clever for her to make the title of this poem from the scientific name of the flower she uses. Only people who choose to research or know that daffodils are Narcissus will know. They otherwise might think that since the Greek god Narcissus was vain with his own beauty that the same connection is made with Natasha and seeing herself in the flowers. She called her actions her “Childish vanity”. Showing that as a child she vainly thought of the flowers to represent herself when she gave them to her mother. Also, she says that she would “She put them on the sill and I sat nearby, watching light bend through the glass, day easing into evening, proud of myself for giving my mother some small thing”. This portrays how engulfed she was as a child in these sweet flowers and the fact that she was able to give her mother something so small that she would love so much. Another important aspect of the poem is the thick description she uses “The road I walked home from school was dense with trees and shadow, creek-side, and lit by yellow daffodils, early blossoms bright against winter’s last gray days”. I love this line because she describes the daffodils to light up the path she would walk from school but then she also has a darker side towards the end of the sentence anticipating a sad ending when she says winter’s last gray days. But my ultimate favorite line from the poem has to be that last one: “‘Be taken with yourself,’ they said to me; “Die early” to my mother.” This line proves the different interpretations two people can have on one topic. To Natasha, these flowers were beautiful and bright and narcissusly reminded her of her slender self with their “blossom held high”. To Natasha’s mother, the daffodils spoke of an early death because they bloom in late winter and die soon into the spring. Lastly, I think it is important that she gives the daffodils personification because it seems like the daffodils have this higher power since they are nature and they say to her that she is too involved with herself and that her mother will die soon. The flowers represent so much more than is originally brought to the eye and I’m so glad I decided to analyze this poem because I found so much from it than I was expecting.

fiddle strings and music

a quick thought about the fiddle strings and music since i forgot to analyze that before. “she will string the old fiddle with five single stings of ash brown hair.” when i read this i realate it back to how the erlking is the head of the woods and so when she kills him she will be able to control the woods with this guitar like contraption with the hairs of the erl king. the fiddle will be her power. and when she plays the music she has control of the woods since she killed the erlking.

the erl king

it is obvious that the narrator is in an intimate relationship with the erl king. and we know that he is basically the king of the woods. but in order to understand what is really going on we need to know what is an erl king anyway? An Erlking often exercise a fatal influence, especially on children by means of alluring promises or visions that led to destruction(Wikipedia). My interpretation of this story is that the woman fell in love with the erl-king because he was so perfectly one with the nature around her. she was overwelhmed by the amount of power he had in the woods. She falls so much in love with him and then finally sees that his intentions are false she is terrified and plans to kill him by strangling him with his hair. And i was a little thrown off at the end when the narrator goes out of first person format and into third person for the last three paragraphs. i don’t recall there being any other woman in the story so i was a little confused when i saw “she” instead of “i”.

a new message

i will rewrite the end of the tiger’s bride story because this was the story i liked least because of the ending. i prefer when familial ties are strong, and when the girl no longer loves her father it makes me sad since i am a huge daddys girl. to change the ending and have a positive relationship with the girl and her father i would take out the fact that he gambled her away. perhaps she might have been taken away from him and he uses all his efforts to get her back. but when she, in the end, decides to stay with the beast the father understands and lets this happen but he is still able to see her all the time. when she looks in the mirror instead of seeing her father in the bad times she would see her father in good times and love him more.

cinderella

“With a flick of the magic wand the pumpkin turned into a sparkling coach and the mice became six white horses, while the seventh mouse turned into a coachman in a smart uniform and carrying a whip”

this exert is an example of figurative language that we talked about in class. it is a hyperbole because it is obvious that a pumpkin and seven mice could not turn into a coach and six horses and a coachman. most of the time in fairytales hyperboles are everywhere because that is what makes them fairytales because they would not happen in real life. the conditions are emphasized to give it that fairytale feel. when you are a child you dont think about how outrageous that thought is all you can think is wow and realize that cinderella can now go to the ball and she can be beautiful the way she is meant to be.

http://www.bgfl.org/bgfl/custom/resources_ftp/client_ftp/ks1/english/story_telling/cinderella/cinderella7.htm

problems with pb

i feel like i have a ton of quotes from the novel, and im having a hard time explaining how i think they connect. the reason could be because i was not in the most creative mood when i was writing my essay so hopefully when i go back and reread it and make corrections i will be able to give my paper a deeper analysis. i am connecting the red fox story to the relationship ali and her lover have and i feel like a lot of the language i use, like sentence structure, is confusing and the reader gets lost. im going to try to straighten out all those loose ends and really tie all parts of my paper together. i also need to work with having each paragraph relate to my thesis to make it more believable. and i want to talk about the relationship ali and her lover have in a couple sentences in my introduction.